來源:中考網(wǎng)整理 作者:中考網(wǎng)小編 2011-09-13 11:29:13
【習作要求】
Writeaboutwhatyouaregoingtodoafteryouleaveschool.
【參考范文】
WhenIfinishschool,Iwanttobeateacher.Thoughteachersarepoorlypaidandtheyhavenopower,teachersarekind,
respectableandlearned,likeangels.
Theyleadthepathwaytosucceed.It‘squitesurethatteachersareveryimportantinmodernworld.
Wecan’tdevelopourcountrywithoutknowledge.
Teachersteachusknowledge.Ilikeallofmyteachersinmyschool.IwouldliketobeanEnglishteacher.
It‘sveryimportantforthestudentstolearnEnglishwelltoday.
I’lltrymybesttobeanidealteacher.Mystudentscanmakeourcountrybetterinthefuture.
【名師點評】
這是一篇闡述觀點的議論文,作者用簡潔而流暢的語言表達了長大后想成為一名老師的愿望。論據(jù)充分,觀點明確,并且字里行間滲透了對祖國的無比熱愛之情和把祖國建設更加美好的。
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