初三中考英語復(fù)習(xí)講座：寫作篇(4)

　　Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I’m proud of myself.”

　　Use the following points as a guide.

　　1.        What kind of person are you？

　　2.        What makes you proud yourself？ (Give an example/ examples)

　　3.        Why are you proud yourself？

　　(1)I’m a sunny boy with confidence and the joy of life. As a music lover， (2)playing the piano makes me proud of myself. Every day， I often play the piano for a while to relax myself. Also， my family members quite enjoy the wonderful melodies. I believe music is of great power. And playing the piano enables me to learn the joy of life. (3)So， I am proud of myself because I bring happiness to my family as well as myself by playing the piano.

　　(1)I’m person who is always confident and ready to try anything new. However， swimming has once been a nightmare for me after falling into the water. (2)When I finally ruled the water around my body， I felt rather proud of myself. At the beginning of the swimming test， I took a deep breath and then jumped into the water. Fears disappeared when I went straight ahead. (3)I reached the wall in the end full of joy and pride. Since then， I realized the meaning of the saying， ‘Nothing ventured， Nothing gained’！

　　(1)I’m a common student who has the most ordinary face and the most extraordinary personality. I am proud of myself (2)because of my confidence and kindness， especially my strong will. There is a saying， ‘Nothing is impossible.’ This powerful sentence is inspiring. So I meet a trouble， I won’t give up. Instead I fight against it bravely. (3)The strong personality makes me be proud of myself. I have already got ready. Let me give the future a big smile.

　　(1) used to be a shy girl， but after that experience， I have become more and more confident. (2)It was my turn to give a speech to the whole class on how to learn English well. At first， I’m afraid that I nearly wanted to ask the teacher if I could give up the chance. However， I told myself that I should give myself a challenge because it was really necessary for a person to be confident. I prepare a lot and encouraged myself much. At last， to my great happiness， (3)the speech was perfectly successful. I’m proud of myself (3)because I am no longer a shy girl. I’ve changed myself to a girl who is full of confidence.

　　3+1的寫作模式

　　3 = 對三個問題的完整回答

　　+ = 對某個重點問題的擴寫

　　1 = 點睛之句的點題和收尾

　　The most important things in my life

　　Use the following points as a guide

　　1.        What are the most important things in your life？

　　2.        Which one do you think is the most important thing？

　　3.        Why do you think so？

　　(student’s writing)

　　There are many important things in my life， such as my eyesight， my subject. Now， the most important thing in my life is the test in June. If I do well in it， I will study in a good school， but if I do badly in it， I will study in a school that I don’t want. It’s very important， I think. (62 字)

　　點評：內(nèi)容空乏，選材俗套，結(jié)構(gòu)不嚴謹，缺乏立意深刻的中心思想的表達。

　　1.        What are the most important things in your life？

　　Learning to be brave， learning to be confident are the important thing in my life.

　　2.        Which one do you think is the most important thing？

　　I think learning to share is the most important.

　　3.        Why do you think so？

　　It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others. It also shows that we have the ability and will to help others.

　　There are always many important things that may happen in our life. Among them， Learning to be brave， learning to be confident are the important thing in my life. I think learning to share is the most important. “Share” is another word for “exchange with each other”. It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others. It also shows that we have the ability and will to help others. As a famous saying goes： One flower makes no garden， so we should learn to share with others.

　　注意：

　　1.        審題要切中題意

　　2.        描述要條理清楚

　　3.        表達要語句通順

　　4.        書寫要清晰規(guī)范

　　5.        身份要絕對避免

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